New love song

just wrote this poem for my boyfriend what do you think?

Hurt and desieved
didnt know what to belive
my heart was broken
my feelings I left unspoken
thought love qould never come my way
but now I know its here to stay

you give me soo much joy
im so...

happy your my boy
words cant express what you mean to me
at last my heart is free
free to love you for all my days
free to love you in every way

you are my joy
my sexy lil boy
baby I love you more than you know
our love will never die but instead it will grow
when I talk to you the world disapeers
like its just you and me here
baby you are my life
cant wait for the day I become your wife

I trust you with all my heart
I know our love wont fall apart
I love everything about u
I just wanted to say I love u

Its awsome. Your a good lyricicts!

omgawd this is really good girl
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