My poem ( no title yet give it one?)

She watches her shadow as she walks
Her hair responding to the wind
And momentum
Shoulders square
Sun siphoning enthusiasm
From behind

I gesture at the scattered sky
For the sake of white-tipped gloves
And wish the arrow-winged birds
Would never vacate...

our field.

Please tell me what you think !

By: shannon ( something)
Please dont steal it im very proud of what I write and I wouldnt steal another poets work do dont steal mine out of respect for wirters and writeing

your poem is awesome! So beutiful! I think you should call it Her Shadow !
_ Hope I helped!

this poem is really good its unique, one of a kind, I love it... I would call it... shadowed beauty. hope I helped.

yeah I love it and yeah Shadowed Beauty would be great!

I love it, it's fantastic, I'm a lyricist so I have a certain appreciation for talent, and that is exactly what you have.