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Is my poem good?

Valentine's Day, pretty? if you think so. Asked by brokenwings 9 months ago, 7 answers.
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An illusion is frightning
It frees some,
But it also buries and suffocates
And the cruelest thing,
Is we never know
Are we the free ones,
Or are we grasping
For lifes last breath

what do you think of my poem?

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Thunder Robot Answered by funadvice on Dec 23, 2007, 01:27PM
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I think its verii good!

&&very well written

good job (:

Agyness Deyn Answered by xoxsteffy on Dec 23, 2007, 01:29PM
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looovee it babes

well done (Y)

O.x

Valentine's Day, pretty? if you think so. Answered by brokenwings on Dec 23, 2007, 01:32PM
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awee... thanks! <3

PWT's rock!!! Answered by plainwhitets on Dec 23, 2007, 01:33PM
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Good :-)

Try to get the rhythm smoother. Poetry is like singing, try singing your poem!

mee Answered by volleeit18 on Dec 23, 2007, 01:40PM
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I love them all!!!
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woohoo Answered by texaskimmie on Dec 23, 2007, 01:41PM
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A little awkward, but as a writer I tend to be picky. You are definitely on the right track.

Answered by love16 on Dec 23, 2007, 01:54PM
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it's good

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