My poem

I'm Just a 13 Year Old with such Ardor for Someone And For Poetry Anyways I wrote This peom To My Girlfriend yes I'm A Girl And I have A girlfriend I been with her for 7months and I have always felt the same way about her my feelings for her haven't...

change and never will I know im young but Love knows no age nor gender and I don't know I guess I was thinking many things when I wrote this please tell me what you think(don't be rude nor mean please thank you)

Sitting on the hill top, watching the birds flying by,
one by one, singing happily they soar into the sky,
thinking about you, my heart slowly begins to smile,
I feel my love for you has been stretched another mile.
Have you ever thought, how much this heart loves you,
if you do, then please tell me in my love what's new,
is the love that we see in our eyes is truly divine,
the love I have for you in my heart can you ever define.
Everyday gazing into the starry night, I write, and-
the feelings I have for you in my heart feels so right,
it's like we have been dropped from the heaven above,
to show this cruel world what's all about true love.
Our love is not like the waves seen only on sea shore,
or like the volcano found only in earths deepest core,
nothing on this earth can ever symbolize our true love,
even the angels are amazed seeing our love from above.
It's true, I haven't seen Romeo and Juliet together,
their love is one tale that would last forever,
no love could replace their name in the history book,
their love is the standard for every heart to look.
May be someday we both could end up with such a story,
that would tell the world our love, in all its glory,
walking down the memory lane, I hope our love will last,
among every little heart in love, be it present or past.
Forever I will have your heart and you will have mine,
hopefully our love will withstand all the tests of time,
if I could write on the rainbow, this is how I will start,
I LOVE YOU and Thanks For Giving Me Your Heart

I like the poem and you ask a lot of questions that I do hope you have gotten an answer to.

I really like the creativity of that poem. I too am an aspiring poet and the only advice I have for you for future reference is that not all of your lines have to ryme.

This is a really good poem!!