My poem

What yous think?
How can I help you out of the dark and into the light? I take pity, feel guilty.
Strangers c you busking, little do they know. Fighting to survive,
Dying inside, lost hope and prosperity in life. I see you standing,
Watching. Waiting....

Engaged to the pavements, lonely has a new meaning to u,
Nobody takes the time to witness the pain and torture in your eyes, I do.
Let me help u. Let me listen. Engage me with your stories and wisdom.

Stranger I can’t stop the poison injected, the venom surges through your veins.
Let me cure you with new hopes and revelations, dreams and affection.
Don’t scar your future, let the wounds heal. Wilfully take the hand of the enthusiast,
Open a utopia to create perfection. Rebuild the foundations of your life.

Good job - keep writing!

Once again...very good!!

I agree! its nice and shows such a great inside beaty of yours.. caring!! loll
*kitty*