My poem

Today I relized I am a poet
Today she is coming the girl in my dreams she is coming. She is comeing to see me she does not know how I love her I love her like the trees love the ground. I do not know if she loves me as I love her for she may hate me and very much dispise me but I love her and seeing her would make me feel as a small child feels on cristmas day when the presents are all arouund the tree. if only I could wake up from my deep sleep where in my dreams she lives and in my dreams she loves me and I love her but if I could wake up and wake up next 2 her my life would be a amazing experience every moment of every day but I have woken up and she will never wake up because the girl in my dreams is only in my dreams

What do you think I want some constuctive critisim and a yes or a no if what you wrote is not clear

again, I like the subject and all of your ideas. for me, the first half of your poem says "I love you/her" or whatever a lot. is there anything else you could substitute in there so it's not so repetitive. at first I thought you were using repetition as a literary device, but then you stopped saying that in the second half. I would go back and just, add some variety in there.

may I suggest that in the last line you change it to "never wake up because the girl of my dreams is only in my dreams"? it makes more sense. also, use some puncutation silly! puncutation is also a great literary device that gives poetry a lot more meaning.

the top line is not part of the poem