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My poem

Asked by funadvice 3 months ago, 10 answers.
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I was blind but now I see all the lies surrounding me

And the biggest lies I allowed myself to beleive have brought me to my knees

Yeah there are ton of fish in the sea but there is noone else like me.

I'm one of a kind and you drive me outta my mind

All the times I was gullable and it made my heart throbbing and sore I'll just say nomore

That is my poem I wroth cause of this reallly cute skater boy who lives next to me... Do you like it?

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$C:\Users\Maria\Pictures\black.jpg$ Answered by blackmagic17 on Aug 05, 2008, 06:17PM
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yeah but don't make so many things rhyme lol but yeah I like it!!! say I am going to start a band you want to write my music your really good!!!

Answered by funadvice on Aug 05, 2008, 06:21PM
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kk I already wrote like 2 songs...

Answered by funadvice on Aug 05, 2008, 06:22PM
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yea I liked it you totally need to keep writing

$C:\Users\Maria\Pictures\black.jpg$ Answered by blackmagic17 on Aug 05, 2008, 06:22PM
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cool!!! funmail them to me!!! if you want...your sooo cool!!!

Answered by funadvice on Aug 05, 2008, 06:25PM
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I cant fun mail... I will find a way just if you make sure when you become famous mention my name as the songwriter...

$C:\Users\Maria\Pictures\black.jpg$ Answered by blackmagic17 on Aug 05, 2008, 06:36PM
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ok them just email them to me ig cause there are some questions I need to ask you that I can't ask on here cause I don't want anyone to get personal info or anything from either of us and I don't want them to take your songs so hold on!

$C:\Users\Maria\Pictures\black.jpg$ Answered by blackmagic17 on Aug 05, 2008, 06:39PM
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What is your name by the way? just the first name to keep it confidential!!

$C:\Users\Maria\Pictures\black.jpg$ Answered by blackmagic17 on Aug 05, 2008, 06:47PM
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We'll have to find a way!!! your songs are so good I bet! and if I ever get to see them I will most definitly mention your name when I get famous you rock!!!