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What do you think of my corny poem?

Asked by nagiya 10 months ago, 7 answers.

dont be mean haha, just thought of it and wrote it down. tell me what you think..

trail to knowhere..
sounds fun, cause sometimes you just want to run
into the ocean
out to the sea..
wherever you'll be
as long as youre with me
because together, as you can see
I love you, and you love me

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Answered by clumsy_clutz on Oct 02, 2007, 03:18PM

me too =) it fits together like a puzzle thats complete

Answered by sarahhhhh on Oct 02, 2007, 03:19PM
| 618 answers.

Very nice! The only thing I'd say is that you repeat the 'E' sound way too much at the end of every sentence. Poems don't always have to rhyme like that, you know.

Answered by nagiya on Oct 02, 2007, 03:28PM
| 11 answers.

I know..haha

Answered by jay_007 on Oct 03, 2007, 04:51AM
| 92 answers.

I like it...it makes me happy lol

Answered by underwaterophelia on Oct 03, 2007, 02:30PM
| 1165 answers.

Cute.

Answered by torimate on Oct 04, 2007, 04:27PM
| 168 answers.

well, its very basic. I guess it's cute, if a 5 year old wrote it. if you really want to make it into our business the standard needs to be substantially higher. but my god. I think you may have potential.