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My (awesome!) poem!

Mario Lemieux favorite hockey player Asked by icehockeyguy about 1 year ago, 3 answers.

I wrote this when I was 12... What do you think?

I’m missing...

I'm missing. Come and find me
Before I pull the trigger
Just to watch myself bleed.
Before I cut my wrists
Just to watch the pattern fade red.
Before I overdose
Just to get...

loopy before I die.
Before I jump off a bridge
I always wanted to die swimming.
Before I run into a new lover, a new mistake
Because without you I’d die.
I'm lost come and find me,
And hold me in your arms,
Let us soar across the universe,
As you say with each other, we can face the world.
All the b*tches and the posers,
All the haters and the as*es.
Maybe even our parents.
You know how they are.
Is this feeling love?
Am I just infatuated?
Or am I just crazy?
It’s hard to decide.
With you.
The way you flirt just enough,
To leave me wishing I was with you every moment.
The way you give me that look,
When you know I can't stand you,
That makes me want to melt in your arms.
The way you talk about religion,
Trying to convince me you want to stay active.
But I know deep down,
Deep, deep down,
You’re sitting,
waiting for me to come rescue you from that thing called family.
The way you try to be a good example,
saying you don’t have a thing for anyone,
But I know you do,
I try to keep myself from laughing,
As you put on your little show,
Good luck,
It’s not going to work forever.
The way you talk about changing,
In your body and your mind,
You think I can't hear you when you're whispering with your friends,
When everyone's around,
I may not hear well,
But I can always hear you crystal clear. ♥

me on the right(old me) Answered by weirdo1 on Oct 05, 2008, 08:55PM
38 answers

awesome!!

Meh cat iz not amuzed Answered by benadamson on Oct 06, 2008, 05:05PM
16 answers

Brilliant!

Cute Lips Answered by liberty on Oct 06, 2008, 06:28PM
445 answers

Wow. That's really good. You wrote that when you were 12? Man, that's good. I wish I had that much talent in writing. Was this someone you were dating?

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