Like my song?

yes,a song

Fool For You

I must've been a fool
to think your hate was just a love-tool
--to take your punches as hugs
--your betrayal for trust

I must've been a fool for you

to think this whole time
I thought your heart was mine

but I gotta give you credit
you had a good lie
--I didn't get it

I must've been a fool for you

[solo]

you were:
--ever-loving
--soul mate becoming

but now I'm proud to
bid you adeu
now I'm glad I was fool for you

(if you dont get it just add music)
(im thinkin a mix of ben harper and john mayer)
anyway...what do you think?I know theres not a real chorus yet

I think it was good but I think you should add a lil more to it.

that was AWESOME it had such depth to it
do you have any more songs? ^-^

ya but there a little hit and miss
thanks though!

man I was singing it it has a nice ryth message me you are really good I think you and me (if what to) can be good together lol but yeah it really nice

good idea lol

I think that it would make a good song or a good poem. it really brings the images.