Like my poem?

As I sat there full of fright
I stare out my window into the night
I always wondered how it should be
I search beyond boudaries, but still cannot be free
I dont know why I hide and act
I guess I acred that if I tell; she'll find out and everything will turn black
I still dont know why she treats me different from my brothers
Why they get to play and laugh and live like all the others
I no longer can rely on my dad
he doesnt protect me like he once had
I only have myself and no other
To defend myself from the horrible drunk called my mother

Please be honest
thankyou
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o.m.g. I absolutly loved it so much! do you no how well that corresponded to A CHILD CALLED IT? omg! it was so good you shud keep writitng it was wonderful it can really open peoples eyes!

it started out really strong...but you have to finish with different rymes..a lot ends in other...switch it up...
its a really good poem has a lot of potential.
love /v/

it started out really strong...but you have to finish with different rymes..a lot ends in other...switch it up...
its a really good poem has a lot of potential.
love /v/