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The pain and suffer
Of my fragile heart
Shattered and threw away
Into slight parts
Crumble and crushed
Into sprinkle of dust
Then blown away
In pure disgust
Damage and frozen
As an aged stone
Sensation of being torn
The feeling of being...

alone
Killing of my innocent pride
Shutter of hopeful dreams
Crying and tearing
The waking of night’s screams
Feeling painful throbbing
Lying down, scarcely dead
Still and silent
The flow of blood red
The end of lies
The beginning of death
Barely living
And contending for breath
My eyes close
For the last time
And the heartbreaking expose
To a new quiet world

I want to see if anyone likes this poem. a lot of my friends say im really good @ writing poems but I want to know if its true. Thx to anyone who reply to this.

Ana 0:]

That is like, freaky good. no joke. I write poems too, and mine aren't half as good as yours are. keep writing!!!