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Is this poem weird or good?

the sky and sun amazing things Asked by cambei 19 days ago, 2 answers.

cancer girl
she is just a girl
with a disease
that killed her world
it gained her sad fame
it was a sick game
the doctors played well
and they only got shame
friends screamed
family cried
a rose was brought
to her grave
on the day...

she died
cancer girl
where are you now?
when they said they would help,
the world took a vow
no more disease suffocates
your soul
when you left
there was an empty hole
life and family left without
shy and cry
say your good bye
the priest raised his old hands
shaking towards the sky
cancer girl
gone awhile
shine some light from a sun
no brighter than your smile
remember
the vivid happiness
blink the pain away
scream and cry anguish
for the girl you lost today

Oh shush, I tried doing it myself. Answered by sarahsarahsarah on Nov 02, 2009, 07:11PM
87 answers

I like it ;D

1 person thought this was helpful
Go Your Own Way Answered by goyourownway on Nov 02, 2009, 08:55PM
29 answers

It is very nice. I love the varying but similar rhyming schemes.

Good job. happy

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