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Is this poem good?

Asked by mix5angel about 1 year ago, 18 answers.

Beautiful,am I?
Beautiful.
am I
She says no!
He says not really.
The mirror is silently
whispering his opinion
that is never heard.
I am brown skin.
I am natural hair.
I am beautiful smile.
I am deep eyes.
I am thick.
I am me.
And...

if you didn't know_
me is in!
And I'll always be me!
So when I ask me,
Beautiful,am I?
my answer will be yes,
I am beautiful

tell me what you think!

Question closed

Answered by southern_bell on Jul 21, 2008, 06:26AM
281 answers

well I like it cause I'm brown beautiful thick happy

$\m/ yeeahhhh$ Answered by ilovemetal23 on Jul 21, 2008, 06:39AM
723 answers

this poem is awesome!!
it even boosts my self-confidence a little :O
good job wink

Answered by xxxemoxxxlifexxx on Jul 21, 2008, 06:53AM
415 answers

I love this poem its really cool it shows other people are beautiful no matter what other peope think its great

Answered by luret on Jul 21, 2008, 07:34AM
277 answers

Its really nice. I love it and you are such a great poet!!!

Answered by funadvice on Jul 21, 2008, 08:08AM
53865 answers

I think its really good did you make that happy

Answered by feedback on Jul 21, 2008, 01:12PM
99 answers

This poem is beautiful! did you write it yourself?

Answered by funadvice on Jul 21, 2008, 01:33PM
53865 answers

*gives many rounds of applause!!*

Answered by mh2m on Jul 22, 2008, 08:13AM
628 answers

this poem is awesome!!

Answered by jb_11 on Jul 22, 2008, 08:30AM
61 answers

OMG I LOVE IT!! It shows that no matter what people think what matters is what you think!! And that you're beautiful no matter what!!! Great Job happy

Answered by mandyyb on Jul 22, 2008, 08:56AM
9 answers

dude your great I love it its amazing.
all I can write about is ducks and like swanns lmao
but dude I love it so much 3

Answered by butterfly_kiss3z on Jul 22, 2008, 09:41AM
1307 answers

beauty dose go far beyond apperances =) *smile and thumbs up*

Answered by eeetrisheee on Jul 22, 2008, 09:56AM
33 answers

I love this your talented and creative keep it ^

Answered by nickjonaslover on Jul 22, 2008, 10:50AM
150 answers

I told you this peom was a killer

Answered by ty on Jul 22, 2008, 08:45PM
10168 answers

Like it, made me happy

Answered by funadvice on Jul 23, 2008, 07:06AM
53865 answers

nice lines, a good poem indeed. good job

Answered by dawnathen on Jul 23, 2008, 08:04AM
725 answers

It was great!

Answered by funadvice on Jul 30, 2008, 08:51AM
53865 answers

hey awesome poem, maybe you can do what I did. enter it I a poetry contest. I'm also wild for poetry. you can enter it in http://www.poetry.com. again, great poem!