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Is this good?

me Asked by xxblooxx about 1 year ago, 1 answer.

I wrote this song yesterday and I don't know if it is good. I take vochal classes and every week we have to write a song and perform it

~~~ You Stick By Me~~~

You’re there when I want to be a hero
When I want to be...

an angel
But I can’t find my wings

You’re there when a boy breaks my heart
When I’m trapped in the dark
All cramped in a box

Oh if I want to be sweet
If I want to be wild
If I want to cry like a child!
You accept me for who I am
Do the wackiest things
Hey it’s just adding to the memories!

You stick by me
Help me to get somewhere!
Constantly helping me to break free!
Through life’s weather
We’ll be together oh come whatever!
You take my hand and hold it to the end!
Oh because you’re a true friend

Seem to know me better than I know myself
And you’re always ready to comfort someone else
Always will be there through the thick and thin
Help me straighten out all of my sins

Sometimes life is confusing
When I talk it seems like no one’s listening
But I pick up the phone
And you let me let it all out
And right then there’s no doubt

That if I want to be sweet
If I want to be wild
If I want to cry like a child!
You accept me for who I am
Do the wackiest things
Oh more memories!

You stick by me
Help me to get somewhere!
Constantly helping me to break free!
Through life’s weather
We’ll be together oh come whatever!
You take my hand and hold it to the end!
Oh because you’re a true friend

Oh anywhere I go
I always know
That when I need you the most
You’ll be there
All I got to do is call your name
No matter how close or far away
Oh because!!!

You’ve stuck by me
Helped me to get somewhere!
Constantly helped me to break free!
Through life’s weather
We were together oh come whatever!
You took my hand and held it to the end!
Oh because you’re a true friend

Oh a true friend….

hey Answered by winryrockbell14 on Oct 29, 2008, 09:35PM
75 answers

it is quite good I must say, I am a song writer myself! you have good taste, lyric wise.

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