Is this a good way to break up?

Letting you go cause im not what you need
Letting you go so you can succeed
Letting you go cause you dont feel the same
Letting you go cause this isnt a game
Letting you go cause im just not for you
Letting you go cause your love isnt true
Letting you go cause this just isnt right
Letting you go cause I dont want to fight
Letting you go cause you dont want to try
Letting you go cause I dont want to cry
Letting you go cause I just cant go on
Letting you go because this feels wrong
Letting you go because love is a lie
Letting you go and heres my goodbye.

I havent sent it yet but I want to know if the message is clear enough. So please give me your opinions

ya thats a really good way... I luv it

Message is clear...Take care !!

Great!

now im not sure but...shouldnt you tell him in person...if you are thinking of sendingan SMS or EMAIL dont do it...it sucks...

Yeah informer is right..best to say it to him when he is alone and not infront of a lot of people..

DAMN I FEEL BAD FOR HIM! I HOPE I NEVER GET THAT

 
I think it's too 'cutesy'. Better would be a sit-down conversation with him where you could really discus the situation. Both of you could end up learning things that would help each of you in future relationships.

Your poem is simply a cute 'Dear John' letter. An in person breakup is a better way to go.

lol to the people who said to do it in person, how does that apply given that this is a long distance relationship?

 
In that case, do it by phone in a long conversation.