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Is this a good storyline?

Tiger cubs Asked by steph_is_utterly_mad about 1 month ago, 7 answers.
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I'm writing a book. It's going to be about a boy that finds a dying dragon. The dragon tells him that she has a nest. She also tells him some quick tips on raising a dragon, and the location of the nest. She then asks him to raise her three dragons.
The dragon hatchlings, named Seraphina and Felix are raised by the boy, Briar, in a mountain range. They are taken after 5 months to find more dragons. They don't even know if any other dragons exist.
They finally come across a lush valley. There lives a community of dragons. They spend some time there before deciding that it's where they want to spend their lives.

Now tell me: Do you think it is good? how can I improve on it? any advice? should there be a sequel?

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Thunder Robot Answered by funadvice on Jun 13, 2008, 10:56PM
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maybe get rid of the dragons and it might do

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Tiger cubs Answered by steph_is_utterly_mad on Jun 13, 2008, 11:08PM
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It's going to be about dragons, no matter what.

Tiger cubs Answered by steph_is_utterly_mad on Jun 13, 2008, 11:27PM
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the beatles Answered by iamcool on Jun 13, 2008, 11:59PM
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Just keep following the plot of Eragon. It's gpt you this far...

Answered by aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa on Jun 14, 2008, 07:34AM
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I wouldn't put your idea for a book on the internet.
people could easily steal your idea and/or heart.

Answered by xxsoccerchicxx3 on Jun 14, 2008, 09:02AM
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it sounds pretty good. ima writer myself. you shouldnt b thinking about sequels yet, unlwess you keep them living on or something and want to show waht happens next. it is a good storyline, but personally, I hate books about dragons. fantasys stupid to me.

Tiger cubs Answered by steph_is_utterly_mad on Jun 14, 2008, 05:10PM
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iamcool- I don't know the whole plot of eragon, I'm reading it now, though.
If it's too much like eragon, I'll change it.

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