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maybe get rid of the dragons and it might do
It's going to be about dragons, no matter what.
Any OTHER opinions? 
Just keep following the plot of Eragon. It's gpt you this far...
I wouldn't put your idea for a book on the internet.
people could easily steal your idea and/or heart.
it sounds pretty good. ima writer myself. you shouldnt b thinking about sequels yet, unlwess you keep them living on or something and want to show waht happens next. it is a good storyline, but personally, I hate books about dragons. fantasys stupid to me.
iamcool- I don't know the whole plot of eragon, I'm reading it now, though.
If it's too much like eragon, I'll change it.






Is this a good storyline?
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I'm writing a book. It's going to be about a boy that finds a dying dragon. The dragon tells him that she has a nest. She also tells him some quick tips on raising a dragon, and the location of the nest. She then asks him to raise her three dragons.
The dragon hatchlings, named Seraphina and Felix are raised by the boy, Briar, in a mountain range. They are taken after 5 months to find more dragons. They don't even know if any other dragons exist.
They finally come across a lush valley. There lives a community of dragons. They spend some time there before deciding that it's where they want to spend their lives.
Now tell me: Do you think it is good? how can I improve on it? any advice? should there be a sequel?
Thnx