Is this a good start to a song?

Letters to the living

If I was able to tell you everything you should know
Maybe you wouldn’t hate me so
And we could move on
My thoughts I wouldn’t act upon
Nobody here is wrong
This is just another song
I will write this/and forget where I have been/learn to live/without you again

Getting together my thoughts run crazy in free form

I like it, I write for my band and I think that this is pretty nifty : ) goodluck with your writing

..no comment..gdLuck though..,with your song..tell us if u're done..

it is a good start . Are you in the music bussiness?

well I dont have any experience with music but that is okay

I think you could leave out the part this is just another song because duh we know that but other than that it's pretty good

It's cool. I like the ' this is just another song ' part.