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Is this a cute poem? ("a beautful moment in time")

say my name Asked by preah over 2 years ago, 2 answers.

my love is where you'r heart is, when you bring us together our heart beats in prifict harmony, ...

the love we have is unbreakeable_ the way our soul's conect it's un makeable_ wish to be for ever_ you and i together_ can time be more beautiful, as we sit in this moment inlove, drop the sun drink the sea_ move the sky just for me_ that is why i cry too_ just know i love you_

byakuya Answered by dark_soul on Jul 23, 2007, 02:12PM
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its kinda hard to show ur emotion
when everytime u try u always feel lonesome
the pain in ur heart the bliss of life
trying to smile so hard but even that isnt suffice
love poetry isnt the words but what comes from ur heart
dont make it seems so hard
words are the beauty but the soul is the best
love me with all ur heart and leave out all the rest.

ur poetry is awesome kinda making me want to write some to.
sorry

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Answered by caramel271 on Jul 25, 2007, 04:11PM
74 answers

it sounds like to much effort was put into this. Poetry comes from tha heart and soul

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