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Is my poem any good?
Every tear from my eyes feels like razors apon my skin
Every heartbeat feels like an explosion
The constant pain in my head has become unbearable
But what hurts the most is the knife in my back
The blood of betrayl dripping,,tainting everything around...
me
This veil of darkness pulling me further from myself
Covering any light that cares enough to shine my way
I see your guilty hand reach for me but I cant grasp it
I see your sorry fire burn near me but I feel only the cold
I've lost my way
The darkness consumes me
I lay down on the bed of thorns and embrace the darkness
Lost in my own head,this jail I made for myself
Waiting for a light strong enough to break though
But now...I sleep