Id this a good song

He's always on my mind, from the time I wake up till I close my eyes, he's everywhere I go he's all I know tho0o he's so far away its just keeps gettin stronger everydaii even now he's gone im still holding on tell me where do I stop cas its breaking my heart dont want to let hym go maybe my love will come back some daii only heaven knos maybe our hearts will find there waii only heaven knows and all I can do is hope and pray yes heaven knows. My friends keep telling me that if you really love hym you gotta set hym free and if he returns in time I know he's mine so tell me where do I start cas its breaking my heart I dont want to let hym go maybe my love will come back some daii only heaven knows maybe our hearts will find there waii only heaven knows and all I can do is hope and pray yes heaven knows why I live in dispare cas wide awake or dreaming I know he's never there all tha time I act so brave I'm shaking inside why does it hurt me so maybe my love will come back some daii ony heaven knows maybe our hearts will find there waii and only heaven knows and all I can do is hope and pray yes heaven knows.

I like it because a lot of people go through what you wrote about have you named your song yet?well here a suggestion call it 'only heaven knows'

Yes. That's what makes a good song (and singer for that matter). It's Feeling. Lots of emotion. What many can relate to and embrace as their own.