What do you think of this poem?

Please dont be mean LOL. be constructive =]
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Lifted...

To a place where
All the things I've longed to forget
Fall off me like raindrops
into puddles of honey,
And in that instant
I become weightless
Lost in a moment
Where time and space..
Forget...

who I am.

Until I'm reminded again

uhh..

Its cute (:

wow pretty good,
I like its simplicity
there's no problem with it but maybe you should make it a bit longer I little bit more emotion,but that's just my opinion
other then that it's great

AWESOME JOB !!!

I agree, I was actually thinking the same thing. But then my mind went completely blank, and so I decided to stop. Maybe I'll continue some other time.
Thank you though!

I like it! Do the puddles of honey symbolize anything in particular? If not, maybe you should change it to something like, puddles beneath me... you don't have to if you don't want, it's just a suggestion, I don't want to cramp your style or anything!

yes actually the puddles of honey are symbolic to something...

Is it personal, or would you mind telling me?

Not bad... very deep good

I like it :]
very deep in a unique way