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I wrote a song tell me what you think complete honesty

Asked by xtinababe91 10 months ago, 9 answers.

WHAT DO YOU THINK..?

ill never forget the day
that you went away, leaving me all by myself
everything went wrong, I dont know
how much longer I can take this
time without you

my mind is going crazy
at the thought of you leaving
so much is...

going on
I dont know what to do

I cant live without you
the one time that I tried, I prayed that I die
just to be with you.
I cant breath without you
knowing your not here, always brings me to tears
I cant live without you

no no no no...

even when its seems like yesterday you left
I cant let go of it, not just yet.
I cant let your face go, out of my memory
please baby, come back to me

my mind is going crazy
at the thought of you leaving
so much is going on now
I dont know what to do

I cant live without you
the one time that I tried , I prayed that I die
just to be with you
I cant breath without you
knowing your not here, always brings me to tears
I cant live...

its like a bad nightmare, that I cant shake,
its hard to put a smile, on such a sad face.
oo to see you next to me
to feel your breath on me,
oooh cant you see, its you that I need,

to look me in the eye, and tell me that you love me
I cant go much longer, with you that much farther
I cant live without you

I, cant live without you
although I've already tried, my heart died inside
I, cant breath without you
knowing your not here, here comes the tears
I cant live...

no no baby I cant live

no matter what you say
ill always feel this way, about you.
no matter what you see, it will be me
by your side, im not going to hide
I cant live without you.

Answered by beautiful234 on Dec 31, 2008, 07:23PM
973 answers

woah thats really good.

Answered by roysters5 on Dec 31, 2008, 08:05PM
136 answers

its sveet! I like!

Answered by blondie101 on Dec 31, 2008, 08:27PM
56 answers

awesome ; )

ily,BDM

Answered by donraysinor on Jan 01, 2009, 12:24AM
56 answers

it need's to be gone over chane some of the words to make it rime right not repeting and to have the flow it allright for your frist draft work on it

Answered by my_name_is_sugarplum on Jan 01, 2009, 03:20AM
46 answers

omg can you sing too? we should totally start a band!!!

Answered by justwonderin17 on Jan 06, 2009, 04:19PM
46 answers

WOAH!!! That's amazing!

Answered by purplefairy17 on Jan 19, 2009, 01:00PM
55 answers

that is stragiht up one amazing song! fo sho

Answered by midnightpigkkcat on Sep 12, 2009, 08:15PM
20 answers

I think its pretty good, but 1 thing try not useing 'I' in every sentence. When I 1st started venting through songs I always used 'I' but then I realized, if I say what im feeling, hearing ,smelling taseting (I no weird) or other feels it works out better

Answered by music_lover96 on Sep 16, 2009, 07:55AM
50 answers

Wow, that's really cool. ---I wish that I could write a song as good as that, lol. =]

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