I WROTE A SONG TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK COMPLETE HONESTY

WHAT DO YOU THINK..?

ill never forget the day that you went away, leaving me all by myself everything went wrong, I dont know how much longer I can take this time without you

my mind is going crazy at the thought of you leaving so much is going on I dont know what to do

I cant live without you the one time that I tried, I prayed that I die just to be with you. I cant breath without you knowing your not here, always brings me to tears I cant live without you

no no no no…

even when its seems like yesterday you left I cant let go of it, not just yet. I cant let your face go, out of my memory please baby, come back to me

my mind is going crazy at the thought of you leaving so much is going on now I dont know what to do

I cant live without you the one time that I tried , I prayed that I die just to be with you I cant breath without you knowing your not here, always brings me to tears I cant live…

its like a bad nightmare, that I cant shake, its hard to put a smile, on such a sad face. oo to see you next to me to feel your breath on me, oooh cant you see, its you that I need,

to look me in the eye, and tell me that you love me I cant go much longer, with you that much farther I cant live without you

I, cant live without you although I’ve already tried, my heart died inside I, cant breath without you knowing your not here, here comes the tears I cant live…

no no baby I cant live

no matter what you say ill always feel this way, about you. no matter what you see, it will be me by your side, im not going to hide I cant live without you.

Answer #1

woah thats really good.

Answer #2

omg can you sing too? we should totally start a band!!!

Answer #3

WOAH!!! That’s amazing!

Answer #4

it need’s to be gone over chane some of the words to make it rime right not repeting and to have the flow it allright for your frist draft work on it

Answer #5

awesome ; )

ily,BDM

Answer #6

its sveet! I like!

Answer #7

that is stragiht up one amazing song! fo sho

Answer #8

Wow, that’s really cool. —I wish that I could write a song as good as that, lol. =]

Answer #9

I think its pretty good, but 1 thing try not useing ‘I’ in every sentence. When I 1st started venting through songs I always used ‘I’ but then I realized, if I say what im feeling, hearing ,smelling taseting (I no weird) or other feels it works out better

More Like This
Advisor

Music

Music production, Music theory, Music education

Ask an advisor one-on-one!
Advisor

banglasongslyric.com. All typ...

গান, বাংলা সংগীত, গানের কথা

Advisor

Eden307

Permainan online, Hiburan digital, Situs web

Advisor

ViralDigiMedia

Music & Entertainment, Technology, Mobile Apps

Advisor

SongLyricsPro

Music, Entertainment

Advisor

Rocky Leplin

Music, Writing, Art