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No offence, but I don't really like it. It seems too... blunt, and to the point. I prefer the poems with a bit of figuring out left to do. I'm sure that many people would like it, but I am not one of them. Sorry.
Britz
its ok some people dont like it && some do it really dont matter 2 me its not like im going to publish it or anything
Answer this Question: "What do you think about this poem?"




![He's a little lad... that loves berries and cream. Lol. =]](http://images.funadvice.com/photo/image/78021/tiny/berries_and_cream_dude.jpg)
What do you think about this poem?
she had cuts on her arms
she sad because her parents fight
and she was scared about her life
she had no friends
never really did
but this girl was a real nice kid
and even had 1 friend her life may not have ended this way
there was a person behind her eyes that wanted out
she wanted to scream she wanted to shout
one day she couldnt take it anymore
she took the gun that she stole from her father and as she pulled the triger
she said 'I am just a bother'