I remember you _poem do you like it

6 months ago today
you left me
alone ,in this world

I walk to your grave
tears streaming down
reminding me of
how you never liked to see me sad

I blame myself
If only I would've noticed
the cry in your eyes
you might still be here

kneeling down to...

place
the new roses apon your grave
I experience a cold chill
and your voice occurs once more

crying harder now
I remember that night
alone in the park
watching the stars

I said take me in your arms and never let go
and you did just that
I remember that night like the palm of my hand

I would do anything for your
hands to touch me once more
to feel your body heat laying aginst me

the rain is pouring harder now
I tell you once more I love you
and start to walk back to the car

I sit in the car thinking, wondering...
how I couldnt have known
that you were gonna hurt yourself

rubbing my belly
your voice comes back
'stop crying im safe now you can leave me here

cranking the car
I grab my stomach
she is kicking for the first time
it brings back that night

one last look at your grave

all memories collide

I will always remember you
I have a peice of you growing inside me
I hope she just like you

when she is born I will feel alive again till then
im dead ... forever

thats a really good poem I like it good work!!!

I didn't particually like the start, but I just got better and better, and the end was wonderful