I just wrote this at the dead of night, tell me what you think!

Title: I don't love you-but I do
poem:I sit looking at the screen
Waiting just too long
Desperate that may seem
But something, is still wrong

I'm thinking it over-did I do it right?
Leaving you behind my shoulder, I just might

After all we...

went through
This is what I get
Was your heart true?
Or have we never really met?

After all this confusion
Here is my conclusion
I don't love you-but I do

I like it too. I know where you are coming from. Just be careful of one thing...you might not want to post your work online. Anyone can steal it, and submit it as their own. One day you might see your own words with someone elses name underneath it, which would be horrible. Other than that, just keep working and writing, and one day soon you will have a big collection of your works.

Good luck!

I like it. God gave you a good talent.

rhyming is passe

I absolutely love it it was terrific great job and I also no where yur coming from..It was really good

Awesome

It's sooo nice, best of luck don't forget to post your other poems

sweet poem
you gave me an idea for a new song haha
your good

sweet poem
you gave me an idea for a new song haha
your good

haha cool

I liked it