Hows this rap?

Its my lil bro's he like 10 so dont expect greatness hahah

My quickness
Is a sickness
No cure
No vaccine
My rymes are mean
No regrets
Bout these threats
No regard
Because I always go hard
Im comin wit no remorse
Im aheada da course
No...

mercy
Ill snatch ya purse, see!
I need
My speed
Im like assasins creed
My people
Have been freed
Now back in chains
But its a new day
Im back on top
Smokin tha crop
Best ever
Someone better??
Never!!
I am a king
King of the ring
Bkq
What it mean 2 u??
It meens fear
Intimidation
Mutilation
Domination
you need sum preperation
Cant handle it
Cant tolerate dis sh*t
Too hard on u
Out of view
Wearin royal blue
and sum gold
We will uphold
Never fall
Above all
From boston
2 austin
Takin overrr
Now its overrr
Im covered in ice
Because I rolled the dice
I cood b nice
I choose not 2
Just got my tattoo
Gats pointin at yoou
I got da gun
Watch dese f*ggots run
Dont giv a f*ck
If you try 2 duck
Because I'll aim low
and put you on da floput a bullet in ya head
Then youll b dead
Your heart gonna stop
Bodies gonna flop
Blood pressures gunna drop
Dats it n*gga

K dats from a lil dude so b easy cuzz

that $hits good!

thats really good...doesnt sound like a ten year old haha but its good!

ok it was me 13 not 10

whooo, dude, I dont even like rap. but $hit, thats gud

garbage a$$ $hit

that was funny

how about mine?

im a turtle with a shell
ill make your life into hell
im a creature of the night
who comes out to fight
thats right,
im a beast that will strike
better watch your behind
im last on your mind
because now your blind
and your soul is mine
my shell is made of steel
thats why the pain is real
strike to kill, thats the devils deal
join my force
and take a course
learn the source
and feel no remorse
take my advice
or pay a price
for a grain of rice
beg for your life
because im holding a knife
just kidding
or am I messing with your mind
because im one of a kind
crazy and ill
forgot my pill
but still got skill
so chill,
homie, on your knees
to the count of three
run for your life
because im setting you free
see ya later, alligator

raised to be free
no boundaries,
so smoke with me
my kush is beauty
so go tap that booty
then eat some brownies
and listen to biggie
and lets get boogy
I might sound cheesy
but ain't I a cutie
no, im tough
look at me puff
I can never get enough
you think its a bluff
come close and get snuffed
put you in handcuffs
because im the sheriff
ha! yeaaa right
im a dark knight
who makes love to snow white
because shes so tight
even though I see her every night
I make her shiver with frostbite
so do you see the insight
im bad to the max
so you can't relax
kick you in the sac
thats the payback
so pay me on time
before I call optimus prime
hes my main boy
made of alloy
here to destroy
reppin outter space
put you on the chase
give you a taste
of milk when your lactose intolerant
and crying of constipation
and you cant eat anymore
until your full, like a bull
in a hull, feel the pull
add the toll
and get sucked in a black hole

your lil bro seems so cool =]
ha hess goood

no wait hes 13 my bad
not 10