What do you think of this poem?

Awaken and gaze out
out into the senseless world.
open the window and
jump.

As you are about to plummet,
you spread your wings and
sore.
Sore as high as the sky. give
out a shout and be answered by
three or four birds.

you listen to their eternal
song. it brings such joy to the heart,
of the the beholder of such beauty.

the world is set for us
not to fall but,
-- to sore .

p.s thanks for reading/ commenting =].

this poem is a very nice one, a nice one indeed. mabe you could write another one.

whoa awesome, you should put this on deviant art or something

Nice
poem

Nice poem, but it's soar, note sore. Thought you ought to know

l0l it iight