Help me with my song please!

Okay so my last question was about how to write a song and I've already started one, so I would like to know what you think of it so far, I'm rubbish at writing songs and its not finished yet so if you could give me some things that I could add/include...

or make it longer that would be a real help : )

Song Name: Do You Care?
Genre: Pop/Rock

Lately I've noticed when you look at me
A feeling so strange its hard to breathe
A smile that shines through the greyest skies
It lifts me up
It fills my mind...

But theres one thing I need to know...

Chorus:

Do you feel, the way I feel
Do you see the things I see
When your just sitting there
Its hard to bare
I just need to know...
Do you care?

Oh... do you care about me?

Well thats all I wrote so far -_- Its not the best but its a start so tips would be really helpful. And I'm so sorry its a love song! I know it gets annoying when people always write about love but it seemed a lot more easier to write about =S

thats like really really good...and a lot of people like love songs

I like it. though I don't think the last part oh...do you care about me is nessicary. myabe it sounds good with the music. but I like it. it sounds good. you are not rubbish at writing songs.