Feedback on poem about my father?

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Why?
The anger in my body
running through like an infection
how could you leave your daughter
with no father for protection?
Almost every single day
gets harder than the last
knowing that our issues
will continue, unsurpassed.
And though you may think its okay
to leave your kids behind
I just cant seem to understand
how you could be so blind.
Now that your nothing but a thought
an unclear, dim envision,
I hope you know you walked away
and stuck to your decision.
You don’t deserve a simple hug
or even a goodbye,
the only thing I need to know
is why daddy, why?

that's really good.
gave me chills.

omggg I absolutly love it!!! you are really talented!!! it has a lot of thought and meaning put into it!!!
good job!

That's a really nice poem. It's straight down to the point and very emotional. I'm sorry that you feel this way, but I'm glad that you can express your feelings about him like you did in the poem. Do you plan on giving it to him?

Excellent - great job of expressing your feelings - I would just say, never give up regardless.

Usually, when I am asked to critique someones poem or song, I have to point out a few things that need fixing, but I really like your poem. In fact, I just answered a question of someone who has the same issue. In fact I'm going to send it to her. She can, definitely, relate to you.

wow your very talented

this is amazing.