Feedback on my poem?

I just wrote this. and it makes me cry every time. this is the deepest poem I've ever written. like most of my poems, it's about my dad.
please, if you read this, comment. thank you!

Im done apologizing
for all of your mistakes
and you being the only
reason my heart aches.
the wounds beneath my wings
the sorrow in my soul
everything I do
is under your control.
No matter how I try
to erase your memories
they’re spreading through my mind
like a ravaging disease.
Every time you lie
is like a bullet to my brain
And every day without you
only brings me pain.
And yet somehow I still wonder
how you get a good night rest
knowing that you walked away
leaving me depressed.
So with my head against the wall
and still tears beneath my eyes
how can you move on
when you didn’t say goodbye.
And each second that passes
is a second gone to waste
turning into minutes
that cannot be replaced.
But your selfishly thinking
you can dance on top of water
keep in mind you lost us dad,
your only son and daughter.

OMG that's really deep and very good

Aw man it is really good, I have written a few poems of my own.

It is an awesome form of self-expression.

I love how you have used poetry as a form of healing. it brings so much reality to your poem. very beautiful.

one thing I would suggest (coming from an english major's perspective) is to go through it line by line to make sure the wording flows exactly how you want it. just polish, your work is great!!!

I think it's great! You didn't use the word 'I' a single time. I don't think.
It rhymes too and I usually don't like that. It flows good though. There's a lot of feelings expresed in it.

WOW AND I THOUGHT I WAS A POET!! NOU IM NOT!! WELL KINDA I HAVE OVER 322 POEMS...BUT NOTHIN LIKE THIS!! =]

VERY GOOD WORK!!

wow your realy good ... your are very talented

It sounds really good you should get it published. It speaks to a lot of people who feel the same way you do.Its personal and it sounds more reality then make up.I LOVE IT

sorry it took so long to get back to you...very good you are talented too...luv your work keep writing and maybe a few brighter poems and you have a career...good luck!

WOW!! that is real deep and touching, right to the core of my heart!! - I truly love how you brought out all your emotions and wrote it out!! you've got the talent of an artist!!

I really like it

I´ve read another poem of yours. and like OMG you have a gift!
You just make so personal in such a way, words can´t describe.

Gosh I wish I was as talented as you are!