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I love how you have used poetry as a form of healing. it brings so much reality to your poem. very beautiful.
one thing I would suggest (coming from an english major's perspective) is to go through it line by line to make sure the wording flows exactly how you want it. just polish, your work is great!!!
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I just wrote this. and it makes me cry every time. this is the deepest poem I've ever written. like most of my poems, it's about my dad.
please, if you read this, comment. thank you!
Im done apologizing
for all of your mistakes
and you being the...
only
reason my heart aches.
the wounds beneath my wings
the sorrow in my soul
everything I do
is under your control.
No matter how I try
to erase your memories
they’re spreading through my mind
like a ravaging disease.
Every time you lie
is like a bullet to my brain
And every day without you
only brings me pain.
And yet somehow I still wonder
how you get a good night rest
knowing that you walked away
leaving me depressed.
So with my head against the wall
and still tears beneath my eyes
how can you move on
when you didn’t say goodbye.
And each second that passes
is a second gone to waste
turning into minutes
that cannot be replaced.
But your selfishly thinking
you can dance on top of water
keep in mind you lost us dad,
your only son and daughter.