Falling into the hands of shame

The blood on your hands
Stains your very existence,
The shame in your eyes
Shows your hiding something,
I will break you, make you fall
Show you your nothing special.

that was very deep! seriuosly =]

your a rilly good writer. I wish I had skills like that because you write so poetic and smooth...♥♥♥

He knows it's eating, it's chewing me up
It's not right for young lungs to be coughing up blood
And it's all
It's all in my hands
And its all up the walls

wow, jonzy2020... I like that. awesome, im speechless!

interesting. . . Are you writing a song?

gawd, that was rilly lame. so what if she doesnt agree with what you say. what if shes not christian or catholic? your so predjudiced(andyburton)

ohkay, once again, nothing towards god.
if you know man or even woman they try to be bigger and better than everyone, my poem is just saying that eventually what shame they aare hiding will come out and everyone will know how big they really are.
and thanks rhinestone_bullets, im not catholic or christian, I believe in no god. I do not have a religion, its just a bunch of bull, and if I did pick a religion then the other ones would bash me for not believeing the same thing.