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Emo poem

Asked by funadvice about 1 year ago, 15 answers.

Take a knife and cut me up
If you hate me, you won't stop
make me feel the pain within
as your slitting through my skin
makes me weaker as I bleed
for your mercy make me plead
hear me screaming in the dark
as you leave
your painfull mark
blood is...

running down my face
as my beauty you erase
trying to cut through every vein
on your shirt your leaving stains
I wish you knew I didnt care
if you hurt me everywhere
you can slit my skin apart
but you cant cut through my broken heart.

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Answered by a7x4evr on Aug 06, 2008, 08:08AM
358 answers

pretty graphic if you ask me. That's an understatement, actually!

Answered by a7x4evr on Aug 06, 2008, 08:09AM
358 answers

CRAP! That rhymed and I didn't even mean it! o_O

Answered by xxxemoxxxlifexxx on Aug 06, 2008, 08:10AM
415 answers

seriously your really good I love it!!!

Answered by hotchick08 on Aug 06, 2008, 08:15AM
138 answers

wow this is awesome...u have got talent boy

Answered by funadvice on Aug 06, 2008, 08:21AM
53972 answers

U ever listened to The Used? Reminded me of there song Im A Fake Good stuff though man

Answered by dawnathen on Aug 06, 2008, 08:32AM
725 answers

Make some music to go along with that and and add a chorus... lots of emo bands would dig that shite!!

Answered by heyjay2 on Aug 06, 2008, 08:34AM
470 answers

its a good poem,
deff. emo.
yeahhh kinda graphic,
but still good.

Answered by zacnobody on Aug 06, 2008, 08:56AM
41 answers

I love it =D

its not graphic I don't know what yall are talken about lol

Answered by underwaterophelia on Aug 06, 2008, 09:18AM
1843 answers

This is absolutely awful.

It's not awful because it's about violence, it's awful because it's cliche and has absolutely no substance.
It's about nothing, and it doesn't even express it's pointless subject in a meaningful way.

That said, don't give up.

Answered by funadvice on Aug 06, 2008, 10:21AM
53972 answers

WoW!! That's really good!!! you shudd b a song writter or sumthin you have talent!! Really good job!! happy

Answered by butterfly_kiss3z on Aug 06, 2008, 10:45AM
1307 answers

ever watched the movie awake? my god! your poem gave me flash backs to some of the scenes! keep up the good work =]

Answered by no_drama_please on Aug 06, 2008, 11:46AM
111 answers

that was good!

Answered by dance4lyfe01 on Aug 06, 2008, 03:00PM
248 answers

your poem was really great. that's now one of my favorite poems.

Answered by rhinestone_bullets on Aug 06, 2008, 05:37PM
313 answers

that was beautiful!!!
omgz you rilly got some skill!

Answered by eeetrisheee on Aug 06, 2008, 05:59PM
33 answers

I loves that poem a lot I;m so jeolous just kidding lol

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