Do you like my song lyrics??

its sung with a screamo voice and a normal voice
for my band called bleed

the song is called the ransom

im only thirteen and did it all by myself!!!

Sending shivers right down your spine
It's something that you're prone to so divine
You were better...

at lies (I was never surprised)
at the way that it felt
Now feel the blade (I was always insane)
but you're the one that needs help

(Quick!) We have the ransom
Tell me how that you can swim when ropes are wrapped around your limbs
(Below!) There's no more chances
So tell me now that you can swim when ropes are wrapped around your limbs

Breathing slowly never worked for me
I cut the throat of betrayal to watch him bleed
a poetic sonnet passion that I scream to the sky
I'm tearing up I feel your love don't leave me behind
a poetic sonnet passion that I scream to the sky
I'm tearing up I feel your love please don't leave me behind

The smell of vanity went away
I followed streetlights till I wound up at your place
We traced our veins (we bled for days)
The current was strong enough tonight
I can taste any more
It lasted on my tongue
You weren't strong enough to say

(Quick!) We have the ransom
Tell me how that you can swim when ropes are wrapped around your limbs
(Below!) There's no more chances
So tell me now that you can swim when ropes are wrapped around your limbs

Grab my heart
Take this down
With your soul
and bury it in the ground
Go

I talked to you today
I heard the tremble in your voice cradle the fall
I know you'll never change so please just hold on
I know it's hard for you
it's hard to understand betrayal within
there is a fine line between betrayal (betrayal) and your friends

Tell me how that you can swim when ropes are wrapped around your limbs
(Quick!) We have the ransom
So tell me how that you can swim when ropes are wrapped around your limbs

Even worse.

And emo isn't short for emotional. Emo was a movement in the early 90s. It's short for emotive hardcore, which doesn't exist any more, at least not in any of the new mainstream bands as promoted by the likes of Kerrang. The original emo bands were bands like Rites Of Spring.

Somehow, some ignorant people decided that emo meant emotional, which is just ridiculous, as all music has emotion in it. So, if you're going off that definition then all music would fall under the emo category.

If you're trynna be all metal and screamo-ey then, yeah whatever. It's rare that any of the modern metal bands now-a-days have good lyrics anyway. You'll fit right in with that crowd, who are, to be frank, more corporate than rb.

its emotional hardcore or emotive hardcore aka emo screamo

WOW!!! I love it sooo much you are a really good writer!!!
I want to know how it's sang now!!!
I tried to sing it w/ my own tune, it sounded great but I want to know what the tune really sounds like!!!

omg that is seriously amazing! your amazing!

Nice! Im not really into that sorta music but your really talented good job

thanks for answering next week were going to practice it and when were ready we will go downtown and record it
!!!

Oh..My...God! that was so awesome!

the band has a new name its called bleeding black love
it doesnt make sense but it was zacs idea

no. because theyre not yours. these are escape the fates lyrics.

People, seriously. These are Escape The Fate's lyrics, word for word. Nice try.

smooth...
seeing as they are obviously someone elses lyrics...
tut!

FAIL.
You suck for even trying to pull this off.
Everyone who believed these were yours sucks for being so naive.
Hasn't anyone ever heard of Escape the Fate?!

YOU FAKE LIAR!!! THESES ARE ESCAPE THE FATE'S LYRICS!!! YOUR AN EPIC FAILURE TO THE MUSIC INDUSTRY FOR TRYING TO PLAGURIZE THESE LYRICS AS YOURS!!! :/