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no its pretty good you might want to add a couple more verses in the beginning or think of a replacement fo the seccond you're my night mare
good one... just a little modification and you got it
Yeah, this does pretty much suck. It's not original, and the repetition is unneeded. Fortunately, just because you write one bad poem doesn't mean all of your other ones will be bad. Keep practicing.
Answer this Question: "Does my poem suck?"
Does my poem suck?
You're my nightmare, I close my eyes and you're there.
You're my nightmare. In my dreams you're everywhere...
The screaming and yelling, tearing and bleeding.
You're my nightmare... The pain in my stare.