Do you think this is a good poem?

Lying on course grains of sand
running my hands through the roughness
the sunlight reflecting off umbrellas
...peering round what seems a deserted beach.

Feeling sweat trickling slowly down my back.
Catching a few words of the excitement
a wave of younger children in the salty ocean water,
watching in wonderment
the stricken look of loved one's faces
worried as they play.

the little boy's sand castle is slowly washed away by waves, it is knocked down like a soldiers' fire little at a time as if surrendering to the tides, inch by inch.

Noticing the pink salmon colored seashell resting
by my feet as I look a little closer,
I see a smug little creature as it makes its slow journey crawling back into the sea.

yes its a very good poem

It's like being in the poem itself

the poem is kind of dreamy sounding.
I like it.

It is an absolutely beautiful poem.