Do you like this poem?

She can’t explain what happened
she wishes she could start it over again
She made many mistakes
And she can’t erase what she has done

She can’t stand the pain
But she cannot make it go away
She is nothing more then a little girl inside
That cries out for attention
Yet always tries to hide
This is her life

The night goes on as she fades away
She speaks in riddles
Because words get in her way
She has no one to run to nowhere to go

She wants to forget what she has said
She is tired of living up to the expectations
Too many disappointments
She is tired of trying to be perfect

Her thoughts are so tempting
But she thinks she is fine
But she already died breathing
Too many tears
To many years
She was a beautiful disaster
that’s what she thought

Too many years of chemo
She had no strength left and no hope
The doctors said she has limited time left
Because the cancer has taken over
2 months later
The nightmare ended

How depressing..

I think that it was REALLY good. Did you write that by yourself?

My mum has cancer. that was a sad poem

that was a really good poem it was the best one I heard in a while

I think that was a great poeam did you write it ???