Do you like my poem?

Cold and dark
Alone and afraid
Lonely and crying
In my sorrow I laid
Tear drops falling
Shivers throw my spine
Glimmers in the darkness
Thoughts of death running threw my mind
Sick to my stomache
Knees feeling weak
Trembling hands
A loving face is what...

I seek
I wont give up
Atleast not tonight
For now I'll sit in my corner
Maybe tmrw I'll find the light

oh my goodness! why so sad? that just pierced me hard; made me get shivers. could be because you're feeling so sad and alone, or it could be ecause I understand exactly how you feel. I do hope you find the light and the hurt ends. for there's so much of it in this world, it turns my stomach, making me wish I could help every soul. I can't unfortunately. anyway, I think it's perfect!

thats a great poem! write more and funmail them to me. I like to hear good poems.

I like it. Truly do! its so sad, but touching. Keep writing.

reminds my of my younger days... very very nice... keep writing.