Do you like my poem?

It's a first draft, so feel free to be extremely harsh.

I hate you
Because You Hate Me
What did I do?
Help me to see.
I don't understand it
I did nothing bad
But you still hit me
Just stop it, Dad.
Why do you do this?
It's evil
It's...

sad
You said that you hate me
I love you too, Dad

What did You think?!

I think it is good and also sad at the same time. I f you are being hit you need to tell someone close to you so it can be stopped. Hope thing's get better for you I really want to stress to you that thing's could be better and should be for you.

Peace love

I'm not being abused. My cousin was a victim, so I feel strongly about it...

shes not getting hit!

I thought it was good =)

Sorry to miss interpret what was wrote but I still stand behind what I said. Abuse is wrong and needs to be addressed. Just my opinion.

Peace

Hate is a strong word.
I think you should change the words a bit.

Hate is a very strong word, I used it to portray the acidity od the father charachter. I dofully agree with your thoughts, hate is a strong word (like the PWTS song, haha)

Because it rhymed, it made me read it slowly... I hate having to do that. It makes me feel like a little kid. You should definately edit the words.

BTW: Poems don't have to rhyme, you know.

I like it, it flows very nicely

xox
Sika

I know poems don't always rhyme, most of mine don't, I wanted a change.

its nice