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Do you like my poem?

me :) Asked by jax about 1 year ago, 3 answers.

He Is Waiting

I throw my attention and my eyes to the sky,
Waiting for resolve or a bright white light,
For what my lips were syncing,
To what my mind was thinking,
Right before I climbed into my bed last night.

I spread my arm wide,
There is no way I...

will run or hide,
From the things He is waiting to teach.
I realize the impact He has on me.
I embrace Him with the shadows of my light.

I saw what I was looking for,
Three or four stars from the moon, maybe one more.
And I know He’s still listening,
And my eyes are still glistening
He’s waiting for me to walk through His door

What dou you thik?

Take me backk. Answered by scenekid1 on Jun 06, 2008, 04:49PM
22 answers

thats beautiful:D
great job.

Yeah............ Answered by bethanyleigh on Jun 06, 2008, 05:00PM
154 answers

I luvz it!!!

love her Answered by ashleys14 on Jun 06, 2008, 07:28PM
112 answers

I luv it is so beautiful

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