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Do you like this poem

Asked by fungirl1990 about 1 year ago, 5 answers.

Alone

Alone in this big house
Because your gone
Cheating
Im alone because u

Forbid my friends
Im alone because of u
You dont want
To b with me
Im alone

Answered by torikeene on Aug 05, 2008, 02:42PM
340 answers

It's very good. I think you should write more to it, fix it up a little and try and put it in for the contest at poetry.com!

Answered by fanpirealice on Aug 05, 2008, 02:54PM
11 answers

I like it a lot.

Answered by weighwood on Aug 05, 2008, 02:55PM
159 answers

maybe fix it up or maybe leave it because it is a classic work of prose as opposed to poetry.

maybe add to it or maybe leave it because it says everything right there.

some work is necessarily short.

but because it is short it needs to be in a book with several others...either yours or a compendium of other poets.

Answered by cas14 on Aug 05, 2008, 04:16PM
28 answers

Its really good, did you write it!? I like it, you should write one 4 me! write one about a girl crushing on a guy, who knows she likes him, but he ignores the fact that she wants 2 know if he likes her 2! you dont have 2, but it would B awesome if you did! XD