Do you like this poem

The night was dreary and the rain came down
She said Lets go for a ride away from town
All thru the ride she had nothing to say
It was almost as if something stood in her way
Then suddenly it came, out of the blue
My parents said I have to break...

up w/ u
I'm sorry she said.. I cant pretend
My parents said our love must end
She took off his ring as tears came from his eyes
At the same time, the fear of losing her began to arise
With tears threatening to fall, he held them back
As he unconsciously parked the car on a railroad track
He wrote something on a piece of paper
He held her hand and said Read it later
He always wished they would never part
He said in a sad voice, You just broke my heart
She opened the door and walked out into the rain
Thats when she saw the lights of the train
Realising too late what she had sighted
With a blink of an eye, metal collided
All she could see was blood running red
And someone saying, I'm sorry..He's dead
The ambulance sounded like an agony cry
Then she read the paper and it said Without you, I'd die

Dang, that's a good one. . . Pretty sad though.

I really like it!

that's great! you got me crying now.