Do you like this poem

We sit and laugh
In your room
But you stare at him
I see your love bloom
You cuddle with him
I am ignored
I walk out the door
And say that im bored
You two just stay
And stare at your eyes
I wish I could tell you
But instead its all lies
When I leave
I...

drive off and cry
You stand there
Hugging that guy
I love you so much
Yes I have feelings too
Your my best friend

I like it

it is so good but the end need one more line that rymes mayb:

So no matter what ill always love you!

ummm its pretty good. just the beat to it is a little off. and I need more feeling coming from it

aw thats kinda sad

it's good
but sad ):

mmm it's pretty good
I liked it