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Asked by voice5w33t about 1 year ago, 11 answers.

Alone in the Dark
I awake
Scared
Frightened

He's watching
my every move
Trying to resist himself
Waiting to attack
but he doesnt

Its just a dream
I say in my mind
a dream, a dream

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Answered by fake_fingernails on Aug 05, 2008, 08:57AM
1095 answers

sounds wicked

Answered by babylove138 on Aug 05, 2008, 08:57AM
576 answers

Wow...thats an awesome poem...and I totally can relate to that because I have freaky dreams when I think someones going to attack me.

Answered by sooitca on Aug 05, 2008, 08:58AM
1012 answers

sounds like you have something on your mind!

simple and deep...how poetry should be..

Answered by lils0phi3 on Aug 05, 2008, 09:04AM
511 answers

I like it happy

Answered by cjscoot on Aug 05, 2008, 09:04AM
224 answers

I love it!
although, maybe you should add a part about thunder and lightning before you wake up.

Answered by meagz09 on Aug 05, 2008, 09:09AM
188 answers

wow your really good! :]

Answered by fungirl1990 on Aug 05, 2008, 09:10AM
39 answers

yeah I love this poem uve got talent

Answered by funadvice on Aug 05, 2008, 09:15AM
53963 answers

It seems like theres a part missing.

Answered by butterfly_kiss3z on Aug 05, 2008, 09:21AM
1307 answers

love it, I can truly relate!! ahaha... I have a survey on dreams, you should take it!

Answered by cutie12341234 on Aug 05, 2008, 09:36AM
10 answers

its great to me !!!

Answered by ciara14 on Aug 05, 2008, 10:12AM
297 answers

Its REALLY GUD!!!

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