Debut back to song writing

Here is my frist song in song writing after 3 weeks and it's called Lies Take a Life for The Virus of Life

So much torture you have left upon so many hurting them with lies
Such a dark heart you have not to even care what you do them all
Look at...

the damage you have caused for these people and no remorse
Fighting for their life cause your lies hurt them so badly and you just don't care
What I see and what you see are 2 different things - you never cared!

LIES - Take a life but you just don't care (2x)
(I will hurt you)
LIES - Destroy and never make things better
Your lies - have taken a LIFE!

Showing what you have done but you turn your back on everyone
No human deserves this treatment you have been giving them all
What a disgrace to humanity you are filled with so much hate
You won't bare to last a day in their shoes hearing you say nothing matters
You will regret hurting them!

LIES - Take a life but you just don't care (2x)
(I will hurt you)
LIES - Destroy and never make things better
Your lies - have taken a LIFE!

Your not right (for those lies) (3x)
Take a life speaking of so much lies you never take them back
Their life has ended cause o your filthy mouth
Change your language - change your life - stop the
LIES! (5 sec. scream)

LIES - Take a life but you just don't care (5x)
(I will hurt you)
LIES - Destroy and never make things better
Your lies - have taken a LIFE!

(light 20 sec. snare solo)

Lies take LIFE! (4x)

Look back at what you've caused
You don't care you killed them with lies
Your a... (2x)

DISGRACE!

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song written by maggot4