Can anyone help me with my english essay?

Im A Grade 11 Student in a University level English class. I'm supposed to write an essay on why trust is important in relationships. I already have my three points I'm going to discuss, I'm just not sure how to start the paragraph. For my second paragraph (which should be my strongest point) How should I start off? To summarize, the paragraph is going to state how having your trust broken holds you back from trusting people instantly in the future and is relating to an in-class novel.

Any suggestions? Much Appriciated asap : )

well generally the first paragraph should vaugely encompass everything youre going to talk about in the next few paragraphs, though it seems redundant. introduce the other two paragraphs in the first one. similar to how you summed it up for us. I dunno, probibly not helpful. good luck

Ohh, just to further clarify, I'm talking about the first paragraph, not the introductory one

Sorry, can't do your homework for you. Against the rules.

I'm not asking you to do my homework? I'm asking for a suggestion on how to start my paragraph..

Hey there, you can go to http://www.123helpme.com/ and I believe that you could find a topic similar to the one your doing and see how theirs started out, and go from there.

Thanks a lot heinzer20 : )

I'll definately check that out!