Can i please have your opinion??

A blur in thick air.
How much do you expect me to care?
This place is special,
but I'm more of nothing than anything.
I'm stupid, I blocked the sun
as I wrapped my shaddow around the earth.
This blur, this thick air is like wind,
it's so strong...

and hard to get thru.
I saw an empty hole in his chest
where his heart should be.
But his soul was made of steal
and his pride couldn't be broken.
I wish I could love, he said,
I wish I wanted to live,
but I'd rather be dead.
I want to get as much as I give,
but karma won't work that way.
Even angels turn their backs on me,
once you teach them to fly,
you'll never see one again.
I told him my heart had died,
but I never did for some reason.
I was looking in a mirror.

wo I like poettry and writting poetry and your poem is pretty good.

see a psychiatrist.

That is amazeing. very good and insightful.
I write a lot of poems too, but they sound really sad to other people but thats not want I am trying to ger across lol.
But anyway thats very creative.

That is amazeing. very good and insightful.
I write a lot of poems too, but they sound really sad to other people but thats not want I am trying to ger across lol.
But anyway thats very creative.

that was so deep but painful... but there have been times where I've felt the same way before.

this is dark and wonderful. I love your poetry

wOw!
amaZing!
I give it a 10!