Brand new song

Tell me what ya think it's called Running Away II for my new CD Death Float coming in March

They say you can push me around
But I'm not letting it happen again
This will be the last day I see your face in my eyes
You don't know what s*it you have...

cause me...

I'm gonna runaway
There is something inside me that's tired of being hurt
You won't be able to stop me from leaving
They made me runaway,from all this f*ckin drama

Just look in my eyes you'll know why
This is my new fate
I want to start over and live again from the start
People try to kill me but I counter every turn I see out of place
This is what you chose to do with your life and to mine!!!

I'm gonna runaway
There is something inside me that's tired of being hurt
You won't be able to stop me from leaving
They made me runaway,from all this f*ckin drama

This will be the last child that you torment
Your damn legacy has come to an end
You are no parent just a twisted couple with no regrets
All of you will be sorry you scarred my life

I'm gonna runaway (3x)
There is something inside me that's tired of being hurt
You won't be able to stop me from leaving
They made me runaway,from all this f*ckin drama

Me breathing your air is OVER!

I like it- a little polishing here and there, and it is really good - I am assuming you are going to metalize this song.
from your photo I am guessing there will be dual guitars, bass, and pounding drums involved- it should work out great.

sounds very good
very passionate ;D