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Bored, what do you think of my poem?

Asked by thex13thxchild about 1 year ago, 7 answers.

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Puppet Master
Sunday, February 24, 2008

Dear Puppet Master,
You have me Strung,
You've rendered my limbs,
And robbed my tongue;
You've stolen my sweet innocence,
I'm your porcelain sin.

Your weathered hands
Dangle my daintily
From your mingled...

strands;
I'm a lost soul,
Yours to control.

I dance and prance
Amongst the monasteries
Of your twisted mind,
Neath a darkened visage
Infernal eyes glare,
Harboring an icy passion;
I've become brandished inside,
Light fades from my vision,
All fades into a mirage.

You've subjected me into submissive terms,
But head my words the tables will turn.
For now without giving fret
I shall linger here from your wicked marionette

Answered by hotchick08 on Jun 03, 2008, 03:18PM
138 answers

interesting and a bit freaky

Answered by looyalty on Jun 03, 2008, 03:19PM
105 answers

VERY GOOD...

Answered by thex13thxchild on Jun 03, 2008, 03:29PM
1387 answers

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NOTE: The picture I have uploaded in the corner there inspired it

Answered by hottbabe_94 on Jun 03, 2008, 03:46PM
5 answers

I like it, but can I have your asl please and add me as your friend if you r a boy not older than 17

Answered by britz14 on Jun 04, 2008, 02:37AM
431 answers

I opened this expecting it to be the usual poem-that-is-good-but-not-brilliant, and wow did I gasp. It's an original idea, and I haven't seen many of them around lately. happy It's really good.
Agreed it is a bit freaky, reminds me of a story I once read. But it's fresh and new, and the only reason it's 'freaky' is because it is out of the ordinary.
Brilliant
Britz