Bad/ good poem?

This is the 2nd poem I've put on here. Tell me what you think! Its called The Doldrums

In this chamber I will stay
Without love
Or light of day
In these doldrumsI have no hate
A lifeless dream is my fate

This hall of life
A gift some would say-
To me...

it is a chore
A tedious delay
There is no day and night
Hours pass
With no sight
Consumbed by nothingness
Around me there is only a vast abyss
The shadows that I think I see
I know with all myself
Can truly never be
For I'am alone in this place
I hear no hope
Or whisper of faith
There is no sound of music rushing by
Or birds singing a tune
Only my internal cry
Neither can I smell the scent of chocolate all around
Vanilla stakes
Enveloped with every bound
Only wisps of air entangle my veins
Sastain life
Keep me in these lonely pains
No job to do
Place to be
Only myself
I
And me

Everything is the same
Average
Indifferent
There is no game
Nothing to be soaked with fun
I wait here without the touch of sun
I hear nothing
See the same
The earth's one evil
I'am to blame
The invisible walls close in upon me
Sealed tight
To live hermetically

In this chamber I will stay
Without love
Or light of day...

thats really good!

thats good I like it